- Will Steal wrote:
- Will is also a
very heavy lover of guns.. especially assault rifles, in his years of training will has learned
how tofir many weapons but he loves all assault rifles.
2 ocean blu i's, blonde hair
In all seriousness i may poke a little fun, but it's very well done. i can tell there was alot of effort put into this, i appreciate that.
Work on refining the context, grammar and structure of the bio. if you'd like to, make it more detailed. like giving a name to the raider camp, give us a location on where it is. Give a few more descriptions on his skills and attributes, try and write more on your relationships to satisfy them.
Just something other than spelling and more content to think about, but does he have a themesong? a faceclaim? more to his origin story? any quirks or quotes about him?
Hope i helped, and didn't sound too much of a dick, you can add Vera Mikko Down there to relationships if you've had enough interactions with her
I'm probably the nicest asshole you'll ever meet